WAKE up and smell the coffee!
We had another pin-up yesterday at Uni, of our sketch designs made from paper models
(see previous posting).
I actually liked what I had done, and at the time of doing it, it all made sense.
However, I had put too much information onto one A1 board and the result was a cluttered mess with no coherency. The presentation was worse!.....

Anyway today is another day.

I woke up at 5.00am (a lie in, of late) and realized exactly what I should have done - less!

(I must edit, I must edit, I must edit).

Work out what is important, follow through with the concept, restrict what is presented and back up the rest in my sketch book.

I can only try!